Reviews For Happily Ever After
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Reviewer: Par5 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

I enjoy your writing and the emotions but until I reread your author's notes, I couldn't pinpoint what was bothering me about this. It's the timing! At the time you wrote this, I totally agree that Pam would feel this way. I guess by now, having been a little frustrated with Pam's inaction, I don't have much sympathy for her. Again, that has nothing to do with how you wrote this but with the feelings I'm carrying over from the show. I did like her becoming aware of how she made Jim feel. And I liked you comparing Jim's absence to being as if all the light and the warmth were sucked out of the room. Hopefully there's still a chance for happily ever after!

Author's Response: The one thing that struck me with your review was your mention of having no sympathy for Pam now. Funnily enough, I wrote this piece because I was mad at Pam because I felt she was so caught up in this fantasy idea of what Jim was supposed to do/be. And now knowing that Jim did make the romantic gesture and she still pushed him away makes me even more angry at her. But I do agree with your hope that there will be a happily ever after.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 08:29 am Title: Chapter 1

This is a theme I remember seeing a lot from before Casino Night: Jim as the knight in shinning armour. We all thought it was the way it would go down...we never expected Pam to turn him away when he tried to "save". This piece had me nostalgic, but I must say I'm liking this season's Fancy New Beesly.

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