Date: March 22, 2019 12:36 pm Title: the truth
Wow, that went through a ton of emotional beats all in a very short time. Great writing to pull it all off. I do like how you have Jim so secure in his feelings for Pam though. Even through his shock, he still knows what his feelings are for Pam and then he's there to support her. Well done on that regard. I can very easily see Pam hiding the miscarriage. Especially considering where she was at in her life at the time. The line you had there about how now they have a stronger bond is great when Pam shares it all with him.
A little bit of a hard story to read considering the subject matter, but you pulled it off well.
Author's Response: Thank you! I personally believe that Jim and Pam’s relationship tends to show its self best in difficult situations. Like the fluff and joking is adorable but them dealing with real hardships tends to showcase their love in the best light. Really shows the depth of how much they love each other.