Date: March 23, 2019 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love that she came completely clean and outed them to everyone in the office this time! Cute story, it’s fun to read about the other character occasionally :)
Now for some technical issues. Our default settings like font size and color will be overridden by any formatting written into the story by the author.
If you do not format font size our site allows the reader to adjust size to their preferences. In this story you have also formatted the font color to black which isn’t usually an issue but we have numerous site skins to choose from. I personally use “sketches” due to frequent migraines and formatting black font makes it completely unreadable. I’m going to go in and fix it for you.
I’m not sure what everyone uses to write but I know google docs works well, you can clear all formatting before posting here.
Date: March 23, 2019 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Font size is fine this time around. I like how it was Phyllis who is the one who gets through to Angela. That Angela is being the opposite of everything she says she stands for and inso doing causing more harm to everyone. Makes complete sense that Andy would fly off the handle a little there. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it :)