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Name: FinerThings (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2008 03:06 pm · Chapter: Epilogue
Awww I'm so glad they resolved everything (or most of everything). Jim's so sweet to take care of her. Great story, loved the angst...and the happy ending, of course. =)


Name: FinerThings (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2008 03:01 pm · Chapter: Chapter 6: Being a Jerk
Ahhh they were so close but the moment got ruined! How sad for them! Oooh he lost his phone -- that explains it. I really hope Pam meets him by the copier. lol


Name: FinerThings (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2008 02:56 pm · Chapter: Chapter 5: Stop Running
Ahhh Karen, perceptive as usual. =)

Angry!Jim...oh my goodness...I like when he comes out. And sad!Jim, not believing that he really heard Pam saying she loves him. That broke my heart. Oh and loved this line: and his heart filled with love for her. It was like an ocean, never drying out, replenishing each time he heard her breathe. *sigh*


Name: FinerThings (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2008 02:28 pm · Chapter: Chapter 4: It Hurts
Aw I feel for both of them -- the pain is palpable. Great chapter, looking forward to finding out what Jim means by wanting her to know...more than once. =)


Name: FinerThings (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2008 02:05 pm · Chapter: Chapter 3: Feeling Better
LOL Michael and Andy are BFFs, hilarious. It's so painful to see Jim act that way around Pam, but I love it. You're so good at angst. =)


Name: FinerThings (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2008 01:14 pm · Chapter: Chapter 2:Too sick to Mingle
Eeek! Awkward!


Name: FinerThings (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2008 01:00 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1: The Merger
Poor guy, just can't escape Pam...as if we want him to. lol


Name: gotkona (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2006 04:46 pm · Chapter: Epilogue
wonderful fic. Loved it all.


Name: time4moxie (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2006 12:02 pm · Chapter: Epilogue
Very sweet ending!  And I really liked angsty!Jim - like you I think he has the right to be.  So does Pam, in her own way, and I think you addressed that just right.  Now they can live happily (sniffly?) ever after.  :-)


Name: Winky (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2006 09:07 am · Chapter: Epilogue
Aww. That was sweet. I love how it came full-circle from the beginning. One thing- make sure to type out any numbers less than ten. For example: "He put the bag on the counter and pulled out 2 cans.." should be "two cans". it's a formality, but the digits can be distracting unless they're describing large numbers. Great fic, and I look forward to more from you!


Name: lisahoo (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2006 05:54 pm · Chapter: Chapter 6: Being a Jerk
Liked how you explore AngryJim and let this sit for a bit with some rain clouds overhead -- cannot wait to see the next chapter!!!


Name: gotkona (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2006 12:51 pm · Chapter: Chapter 6: Being a Jerk
Can't wait for the next chapter to see if she meets him.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I wasnt wondering should I just let them reunite last chapter but to me, that would do injustice to all the pining and patience and Ram moments Jim had to put up with.  He deserved to vent and feel insecure and for Pam to know how much pain he was in.


Name: NeverEnoughJam (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2006 12:21 pm · Chapter: Chapter 4: It Hurts
Enough. Don't spin this out any more. They've had their tears and their recriminations; it's time for the reconciliation. Go for it!


Author's Response: I appreciate your commentary, however, this is my story and I have ideas of where I want to go with it.


Name: lisahoo (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2006 05:08 pm · Chapter: Chapter 5: Stop Running

GREAT Angry!Jim!  and love this: So Jim Halpert decided to grow a pair -- freaking awesome!

More chapters to come, right?  Oh, happiness! 



Name: Rebecca (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2006 04:41 pm · Chapter: Chapter 5: Stop Running
yes!!! a happy ending!!! i'm such a sucker for a good jam story, great job!


Name: gotkona (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2006 03:49 pm · Chapter: Chapter 5: Stop Running
Oh yes!!! They sure did need that, and so did we. Great job


Name: time4moxie (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2006 08:31 am · Chapter: Chapter 4: It Hurts
While I definitely think Pam needs to make the first move, I'm really liking the fact that you are writing Jim to be a bit more flexible in what he's willing to do as well.  Looking forward to more!


Name: lisahoo (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2006 07:05 am · Chapter: Chapter 4: It Hurts

OMG, when I saw there were TWO new chapters, I thought it was safe to read, but I am now FREAKING out waiting for the next one! 

Great premise & I am just enthralled at how these two will work out the pain and awkwardness ~~ you are exploring some new depths with Jim ~~ and I am not usually much on the angst, so, well done! 



Name: gotkona (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2006 09:16 pm · Chapter: Chapter 4: It Hurts
I so liked that confrontation.  More please


Name: kaystar (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2006 06:08 pm · Chapter: Chapter 2:Too sick to Mingle
Best lines ever - "He felt his heart beat so fast it almost jumped out of his chest, and for a second, he imagined a beating heart skipping across the floor and throwing itself out the window. Or better yet towards Pam, who would probably recognize it and step on it again"  The first line made me smile, the second line made me sad. Can't wait for chapter 3.


Name: gotkona (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2006 06:30 am · Chapter: Chapter 2:Too sick to Mingle
Wow that was an intense ending there. Can't wait for the next chapter


Name: Lissa_Maylee (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2006 09:33 pm · Chapter: Chapter 2:Too sick to Mingle

Run after him, Pam! 

Seriously, can't wait to see what you do next.



Name: TV_Buffy (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2006 09:33 am · Chapter: Chapter 1: The Merger

Interesting premise for a story. Hope you continue - I'd like to see where your version of the merger goes.



Name: NeverEnoughJam (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2006 10:41 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1: The Merger

"illiciting" -- no. Common mistake. You want "eliciting".

 

She looked beautiful. And his heart was relieved, full, and in pain. And she was in Stamford. In his office. At his job. And in his life again.

Oh shit....

 

GREAT ending. Heh. Poor Jim. 

 



Name: Lissa_Maylee (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2006 08:43 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1: The Merger
Oooh, interesting.  Can't wait to see what happens next!


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