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Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 27, 2019 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

I did not expect to be attacked by so many JAM feelings this early in the morning... This was a lovely balance of fluff and fluff. As always, I love the little details you include, i.e. the spelling of Pam’s name. Way to fix that little hiccup.
It was great to see them rewatch it together at home, with the discussion of different highlights. I always enjoy seeing a version of the teapot letter, and this was no exception. Although, I don’t quite see Jim being that articulate with his feelings that early on. That’s the beauty of the cast never telling us what was in there though, we really don’t have any idea so it’s super open for interpretation.
I like this writing cycle that you’re on! The more one shots & Silver Wings the merrier!

Author's Response: Thanks Jenna. The wording of the letter comes out of my earlier story "This Thing Called Life," where Jim had already gone through some rough drafts and enlisted the help of his sister before settling on the final outcome. Also in this timeline Jim had known Pam (at Dunder-Mifflin at least) for a few years by the time he wrote the note.

I'm glad you liked it. For me it's a lot of fun to find the little things and work them into fics.

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