Date: October 10, 2019 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
Lovely way to wrap this up. Great way for Pam to gain the confidence to walk across those coals and really go after what and who she wants in life.
Fun scene there at the end. You can almost hear Jim's brain short-circuit when he opens his eyes and sees her in that get up. Sweet and sexy at the same time. Well done.
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Date: September 26, 2019 12:01 am Title: Chapter 3
This was a fun update. Kelly is so very Kelly. Phyllis and her “gym at home” was also great. It was nice to see Jim stepping in and helping to put an end to the questioning. Looking forward to seeing how you wrap things up.
Date: September 25, 2019 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
Girrrrrrrl! That is EXACTLY what would have happened with everyone in the office. I DIED at that Phyllis moment. D-I-E-D! But, man you hit Michael (he wanted to save money from the bachelor party; omg he WOULD!), Kelly spilling the beans, and Kevin’s response were ALL spot-on. Oh, and Jim’s IM at the end and stepping to shut it down in such an understated way. Okay, fine, I’ll swoon. Can’t wait to see how you wrap it up.
Date: September 25, 2019 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yeah, that's about how I could see the office reacting to that kind of news. Very much in line with some of the best cringe worthy moments in the show. I do like that it's Jim that's there to step in regardless. His IM at the end there was a great way to top that off.
Since you asked, what would I want this dancing queen Beesly to achieve? Well clearly she's gotten a lot of confidence in herself, so I'd hope she uses that confidence to tell Jim just how she really feels and thus they get back to the happy JAM couple we know they can be. But then again I'm a sucker for a happy ending.
Date: September 24, 2019 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is so much fun! And, yes, you definitely got Pam in character. Still hesitant but slowly coming out of her shell, impressing herself. Great job, SS! Can’t wait to see what’s next! (Is it weird that at some point I really hope Phyllis finds out and says she and Bob have a pole?! Cause I feel like Phyllis would be Very Into this version of Pam.)
Date: September 24, 2019 08:08 am Title: Chapter 2
I’m really enjoying your Kelly in this. She’s fun. It’s nice to see Pam building up her confidence - I’m hoping that all the progress she’s making will give her the strength to approach Jim. That said, it’s nice to see her finding her confidence for herself, on her own terms.
Date: September 24, 2019 03:27 am Title: Chapter 2
Great way to show how Pam is building up her confidence. I like that she's doing this for no one but herself. After years of trying to be something for someone else, when she finally does this just for her, it pays dividends. That other people are noticing, namely Jim, is just another added benefit.
Date: September 20, 2019 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
So I'll admit I was a bit hesitant to click on this story. Mainly because I feel this might be a bit to out of character for Pam. However the way you've got things set up does make sense. Especially on this day and where she is in S3. So it's hard for me to say I like this story so far, but it is intriguing to say the least.