Date: October 22, 2019 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a great take on the Casino night and after events. It's very angsty! Nice slap there too. I was really hoping Emily and Mark would talk him into calling Pam but that would negate the angst. :-) I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the words of encouragement Sprinkles. Lets me know that I'm on the right track. I hope you'll enjoy everything else I've got in mind too.
Date: October 22, 2019 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
For someone who doesn't like to do angst, you sure do a good job of it! This is an angrier Jim than we ever saw, and a more emotional one. But it plays out in a very believable way. Looking forward to the next chapter Warrior!
Author's Response: Thanks Clover. Yeah we're seeing an angry and emotional Jim right now since Casino Night is so raw. Thanks for the review.