Date: November 12, 2019 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
No seriously. Do you know how much I love this story, and you?
When Pam taunts him with “Come back here…” This is the content, and the version of Pam I’m here for. She’s so bossy! And sassy. Jim didn’t stand a chance, honestly.
But then listen. AG. Not only does Jim just stand there in her doorway and talk dirty to her, He. Drags. Her. By. The. Bodysuit. Into her apartment. With one hand. This is it. Drunk Bossy Pam and Manhandling Demanding Jim are my new favorite versions of themselves.
You seriously just kept one-upping yourself with the smut paragraph after paragraph, and it’s all perfect. There isn’t anything I can say, other than “good girl” was a great addition to this story. And I’ve already told you this but Begging Jim? More of HIM please.
And then you go and make them all sweet and loving and they’re together and it’s perfect and you did it… you wrote the bodysuit fic and I’ve never been prouder of you. Thank you for this!
He picked her up by the bodysuit, AG.
Date: November 12, 2019 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey, remember when we asked you to write the bodysuit story and you did it? I knew you could do it.
No surprises here, I love everything about this. I love that Pam’s pouting like a three year old and that she’s day drinking because she’s a grown ass woman making her own decisions.
So, one of my favorite things about your writing is how you string these little phrases together – like “he’s on speed dial” and “I’m on drunk dial”. That’s SUCH a good line.
I’m always a fan of your drunk Pam and this is no different. “Goddamnit Karen Filippeli” made me laugh out loud. Also loved that Jim just kicks the step ladder out of the way to hang the painting. I’m a details girl, these kinds of details delight me.
“Huh. Right. Bodysuit. It has snaps.” AG YOU DID THIS. I KNEW YOU COULD DO THIS AND YOU DID IT.
And it’s everything I wanted it to be. I still can’t believe Jim was able to walk away from that.
Date: November 05, 2019 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. Wow. Wow. I'm speechless. I read this first thing this morning and it stayed with me all day. The images kept coming back at the most awkward times! You write the sexy bits so well. Thank you for finishing us - I mean, the story - and not leaving us waiting. Great job!
Date: November 05, 2019 04:14 am Title: Chapter 2
Yeah I didn't think you'd just let Jim waltz out of there. I love that once she gets him back inside the apartment they just wantonly go for it. As hot and steamy as everything is, it's that bit at the end that is the most telling. They're finally fully together and that's all that matters. It's a great contrast.
You have such a great talent of having hot and steamy scenes, but the thing that really comes across is the deeper connection between these two characters.
So while you're off the hook for this fic, you're still on the harassment hook. *glances over at AG's other WIP's* Then again, I'm not really one to talk. *glances over at his own unfinished stories* Hmmmm, how 'bout we just call it even for now?
Date: November 04, 2019 10:51 am Title: Chapter 1
I should have known better than to read this at work. *fans self* Lordy, who knew the infamous bodysuit story would appear on a random November Monday. This was remarkable - steamy at a whole new, amazing level.
Date: November 03, 2019 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
*Stunned expression of disbelief* A-guh-huh...hold on, let me compose myself here for a second or two. Ok, so in a sentence...
Holy $&*@! You did it. You actually freaking did it! After all this time, and so many nights in chats of people begging for this, there it is. The bodysuit story. Honestly I really never thought you'd actually write this. Coley! DC! How much did that bribe cost you two?!
So yeah, I mean really what else is there to say about that, other than for the love of all things good and right with the world please let Tuesday get here soon. After all that and to have it end with Jim walking out the door? Oh Jim, me thinks you may have underestimated what you just done there did.
Yeah, so, not really sure what more to say. Pardon me while I go take a walk outside to cool off for a moment or ten. Outstanding as always AG.