1 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2020 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really like the ways you've found to have Jim and Pam pranking Dwight and Michael, and the different route he's taken to being supportive of her art - plus, the fact that this support actually brings her closer to marrying Roy is solid, organic conflict creation.
(That book actually sounds very much up show-Dwight's alley - although he'd definitely get in trouble when Angela found and tried to read it, assuming it was a religious novel.)
Author's Response: Thank you! But I hope Dwight wouldn't have many troubles with that book — judging by the prejudice against Catholics in that time England, Angela (if she tried to read it) would just confirm her worst suspicions against them.
1 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2020 10:28 am Title: Chapter 4
This is still great fun - and I'm liking the introductions of Roy and Preacher Dwight. That's a great idea!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2020 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
I absolutely love the way you’ve brought Jim and Pam into working together. And to have Jim orchestrate it all by making Michael think that he needs it? Brilliant.
It’s so fun to see Michael in this time. He fits the genre so wonderfully. He has enough money/social standing to be seen as somewhat important in society, but he’s so delightfully improper, etc. and himself. It’s great!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review (and even more for your help)!
I kinda like this Michael. He's fond of my faves and mostly harmless. It might be OOC, but I'll keep this line :)
1 [Report This]Date: December 31, 2019 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm loving this. Great work with the adapted banter and with the characterization. More JAM upcoming, I trust?
Author's Response:
Of course ;)
And thank you for your reviews and reading!
Date: December 31, 2019 07:12 am Title: Chapter 4
Great way to have this Jim prank preacher-Dwight. Seemed like quite the appropriate jest, especially considering this Jim is so well versed in books.
Lots of little warm and glowing moments between Jim and Pam here. Especially with him being complimentary about her artwork. It's wonderful to envision this Pam starting to glow when she's around Jim. Makes me very curious as to how this will all play out for the two of them.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Hope I keep develop their relations naturally and without the rush.