Date: August 19, 2022 12:56 am Title: Chapter 8
'That is what she said' got me rolling😆
Date: October 07, 2020 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
I've often thought that we really should've gotten more of a taste of the Michael-Jan relationship in canon. You have convinced me otherwise. Poor Michael! Although really, in this case, I feel like the Lady Levinson has more of an excuse - it's not like she can strike out on her own as an independent woman. I am pleased that you're bringing Holly into this - holds out some hope for Michael after all.
Oh, poor Pam. Dark days ahead before the light, I'm afraid.
Author's Response: Sadly, but even a title wouldn't give a woman independence, so, I guess, Lady Levinson just tried to keep the level of comfort she'd accustomed to (but yes, her methods are questionable).
Date: March 16, 2020 02:41 am Title: Chapter 8
You know I love this story, but it’s worth repeating that I really love this story. This chapter was utterly heartbreaking.
You blend Austen and The Office worlds so well. I could never have imagined Michael taking on Jan’s financial issues in this world, but you made it work so seamlessly.
I wasn’t expecting Holly’s appearance in this. It’s nice to see her as kind of a friend for Pam. I’m curious to see how her storyline plays out - especially if she ends up with Michael...
I can’t wait to see what you write next!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Your reviews are the best encouraging to write more :)
I like the idea of Pam having female friends (and friend aside Jim in general) and I quite like Holly, so... Miss Flax appeared. I guess, she's both Lady Russell and Mrs.Smith to Pam - Anne Elliot. Hope it was fit well :)
Date: March 15, 2020 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
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Author's Response: It'll be better, I promise :)
Date: March 15, 2020 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh my. Yes, this makes sense as who we'd meet but poor Pam. Poor poor Pamela. Still, a little heartbreak is necessary for growth, I suppose. Still well done on the Regency imitation, very enjoyable.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I hate to see Pam suffers, but for both canons' sake, it has to happen. But that state will improve soon!
1 [Report This]Date: March 15, 2020 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh, my heart is hurting for Pamela! I see that nod to "Persuasion " here...
I feel like I can't read your updates fast enough - looking forward to the next!
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading :)
The next chapter is almost done, so... stay tuned!
Date: March 15, 2020 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
Quite a few references to the show here and there. Jan's financial woes, the appearance of Holly, and of course Jim's return with another woman on his arm. All wrapped around the time period. Great to see an update. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Update will be quite soon.