Date: October 07, 2020 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 12
I kinda love that a not particularly nice prank leads to both Angela and Dwight getting married and Pam and Jim getting a little bit closer to confronting what's between them.
Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't like this evolved, mean Jim either, so I decided to punish him that way :)
Date: April 14, 2020 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 12
My favorite thing about this chapter is without a doubt Jim’s prank backfiring and Dwight getting published! And then using his small fortune to marry Angela. It’s hilarious. I wonder how Jim feels about accidentally being responsible for Dwight’s success...
It was also great to have Ryan’s motivations revealed - so he’s our Mr Elliot in this world. That makes a lot of sense. Although, I’m glad he isn’t making moves on Pam.
Pam’s snap was perfect. Very Anne Elliot, but without copying the original too exactly. Just the right amount of things being said to really get Jim thinking...
I’m looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your lovely review!
I think, Jim is jealous. Mostly, because Dwight is going to marry the love of his life, and Jim... well, isn't. Yet ;)
I'm glad you like the story!
Date: April 13, 2020 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
Yes that's a bit of a snap. Subtle enough that those around the table wouldn't suspect anything amiss, but seemingly loaded with undertones for Pamela and James here. Especially if that exchange comes after a month of James being around with another woman on his arm. Nicely written.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really enjoy playing with subtlety and double meanings.
Date: April 13, 2020 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 12
Lovely. A good snap indeed, and well deserved.
Author's Response: Thank you!
1 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2020 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
That is quite the tightrope you have Pam on here.
I hope Jim is picking up what Pam is putting down.
Author's Response:
Oh, he is, he is :)
Thank you!