Date: October 07, 2020 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ah! A quite nice way to wrap it all up - I love the touch of circling back to their first meeting. And so it all comes down to a classic case of missed messages and miscommunication, cleared up at last and allowing our darlings to move forward! Nice.
Author's Response: Thank you! I like it when stories finish the way they started, and I'm glad you like it too!
Date: April 28, 2020 03:35 am Title: Chapter 14
This is the best! There’s nothing like a last ditch confession of love in a letter to truly keep with the Austen source material. Just perfect.
I’m so excited we get an epilogue and some extra joy, after all this pining for so long.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, Jenna! I'm glad that this journey finishes on a happy note. Perhaps, I'm addicted now to fluffy happy endings :)
1 [Report This]Date: April 27, 2020 10:16 am Title: Chapter 14
Glad that Pam finally got the Jim, sad that this means the story has run it's course. Great job all the way through, I really enjoyed it.
Looking forward to how you wrap this all up.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed this journey!
1 [Report This]Date: April 27, 2020 09:28 am Title: Chapter 14
Amazing what a letter can do to a person. Loved the change in her after she read it. After so much that's gone on it's now their time. Of course the image of Jim riding up on horseback and her running (or the regency equivalent of the same) is a delightful image as well.
Heck of a proposal there too. Very much not unwelcome. Great to see how all that unfolded.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review! I wanted to make this their meeting looks like their first one, and I'm glad it worked out well.
Date: April 27, 2020 08:14 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh that is adorable. A very good letter and a very lovely response to it. I do wonder how Jim got away from the Bath party--and Karen--but then again, the show never really bothered to deal with that in detail either ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
I think Jim went with the line 'Oh Lord, how could I forget <insert needed object> in Dunder Hall? I cannot do without it!' And then he rode into the sunset. Into the noon, to be precise :)