1 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2021 08:20 am Title: Auto-Negotiation
I'm really enjoying this - I always love a good "outsider-meets-Dunder-Mifflin" story.
1 [Report This]Date: January 14, 2020 06:07 am Title: Auto-Negotiation
Very nice version of the guy meeting Michael in particular but really all of them. Good work.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was worried it might come across as either stilted or abrupt.
1 [Report This]Date: January 08, 2020 02:09 am Title: Auto-Negotiation
Poor Carl... What a greeting. Of course Dwight and Michael need to involve themselves. Very typical of the delightful chaos that is Dunder Mifflin...
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Date: January 07, 2020 10:47 pm Title: Auto-Negotiation
Nice on getting some of Michael's Michael-ness in there. I know a lot of people sometimes find it hard to write him because he's so out there. However this seemed well in keeping with what we see in the show. Good intro for the character. Seems like a good set up for whatever it is you've got coming next.
Author's Response: Thanks! I did have a really hard time writing Michael, but then I just figured, what would be the most inappropriate thing to assume here? And just went with it.