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Reviewer: One_Small_Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2020 03:02 am Title: Saturday, March 25, 1995

This is such a mood, journals hold so much. I can't even imagine some of the stuff that are in my old ones. I too have had journals for a long time, since 5th grade, and holy moley...
This is really good!

Reviewer: Guten Schriftsteller Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 11, 2020 06:50 pm Title: Saturday, March 25, 1995

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Not Roy ugggg Pam why are you so dumb? I get it she’s 16 but no don’t do it just don’t.

Reviewer: HonestAndCourageous Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2020 06:27 pm Title: Saturday, March 25, 1995

This is really fun and sweet! (Catching up on all chapters here) I am alternately cringing and laughing as this is making me reflect on my own high school/ diary experiences! Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: I love it! If it makes you feel any better, I'm half cringing and laughing while writing it haha! Thanks for stopping by!

Reviewer: HeyItsRachiiee Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2020 03:05 am Title: Saturday, March 25, 1995

This is so sweet. Young Jim is genuinely making me tear up - he’s so nice.

I hope they have a second date and that that one goes better for Pam :)

Loving this story!

Author's Response: So far so good!! Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2020 09:37 am Title: Saturday, March 25, 1995

This definitely felt like a 16 year old's journal from what I remember. I'd be interested in whether you wanted to keep this as teen Pam or consider a fiction that she keeps doing it later. Also interested in how AU you want to get (or not).

Author's Response: I'm thinking starting here and then having it grow with her as she gets older. Might go a bit into AU, but haven't decided on that yet.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2020 04:33 am Title: Saturday, March 25, 1995

This is a lot of fun. New looks into teenage Pam and her thoughts as she grows are always interesting to read. I do really like that here, before Roy gets involved, she has these big plans for how she wants to live her life. Very fun to see. I'll be very curious to see if in future entries during times of turmoil in her life she mentions coming back to this entry and remembering what she wanted out of life here when she was 16.

Author's Response: That's a really good idea to add to this story. I hadn't thought about that for this, but in real life I do this too. Seems appropriate to mirror it here. Thanks for the reviews as always!

Reviewer: HeyItsRachiiee Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2020 02:23 am Title: Saturday, March 25, 1995

Yes! I love this idea!
I’d love to see multiple entries per year, maybe like the bigger events - like her being asked out by Roy, graduation etc
Please continue :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! That's kind of what I was thinking, but this helps steer the "story" a bit more. :)

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