Date: March 16, 2020 04:21 pm Title: Thursday, November 16, 1995
Oh Pam! The settling for Roy is painful. At you're going back to art. And Jim, you couldn't have called her? Sigh.
Date: March 16, 2020 02:10 am Title: Thursday, November 16, 1995
Oh boy, if only Pam was a little kinder to herself in the way she sees herself. Then she wouldn’t give Roy the time of day. Ugh.
Please don’t tell me I have to wait until years into Dunder Mifflin for Pam & Jim to sort themselves out in this universe too?!
Author's Response: Maybe not years, but I'm thinking it'll be a bit!
1 [Report This]Date: March 15, 2020 10:07 pm Title: Thursday, November 16, 1995
Ugh all the red flags already, like how Pam’s art remind Roy of lame cartoons. Good for her for drawing him as a “lame cartoon” though! You do such a good job conveying the high school experience. I’m sure there will be more angst (there was plenty in my high school days) but I can’t wait to read!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's a great compliment!
1 [Report This]Date: March 15, 2020 07:03 pm Title: Thursday, November 16, 1995
Oh, Pam... glad she's back into her art, but it's hard seeing her selling herself short and thinking she's not good enough.
You're doing a good job conveying the "high school experience " in just a few words. Nice work!
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Thank you for the review!
Date: March 15, 2020 06:28 pm Title: Thursday, November 16, 1995
I get why Pam is thinking these things. Not that I like where it"s going to end up. Not fault to your writing at all there. It's just hard getting through this part.
Author's Response: I agree ha! Not fun, but necessary.