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Reviewer: grc73 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2023 03:44 pm Title: Everybody here wanted somethin' more

Any chance you’re going to pick this one up again?

Author's Response: I very sincerely hope to finish all my WIPs one day! I just need motivation to line up with time (which is rather elusive these days). Maybe the writing gods will smile upon me this summer, fingers crossed!

Reviewer: GreenyshEyed Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 10:43 am Title: Everybody here wanted somethin' more

Just found this and I love it! I hope you update it soon!

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2020 09:38 am Title: Everybody here wanted somethin' more

Oooh I’m so intrigued by this! I love how you worked Kevin into the story. That’s part of why I love AUs, seeing how everyone becomes a “new” character. I am unfamiliar with this movie so I don’t know what to expect, but I can’t wait!

Reviewer: HonestAndCourageous Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2020 09:26 am Title: Everybody here wanted somethin' more

Oh, I'm sitting here wanting to turn the page to read the next chapter!!!
I loved the little exchange of looks between Jim and "Rachel" at the bar - so them - I could picture it well! Nice to see Kevin in the story, too, with a nod to Scrantonicity!
Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Ava Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2020 05:59 pm Title: Everybody here wanted somethin' more

I just really love what you're doing with this! Kevin as the bartender, the nods to Brown and Cornell, and what's valuable about her handbag... so good. Hope to see another update soon :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2020 04:40 pm Title: Everybody here wanted somethin' more

Fun to see Kevin show up here. Interesting little quest they're on. Still lots of unanswered questions about everything, but all in due time I'm sure. I like the way they're connecting here. You've got their banter down well. Looking forward to more as always.

Reviewer: Clover Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2020 10:04 am Title: Everybody here wanted somethin' more

NLM, all of your writing so completely sucks me in! Toward the end of this chapter I had to remind myself, sadly, that there isn't another chapter yet. But oh, how I love this! Your interactions between them are so true and sweet and totally in character --- what a treat! I sure hope you are bored silly right now and can bless us with another chapter soon. But I know that your pefection takes time. I'll try to be patient. :)

Reviewer: SprinklesTheCat Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2020 06:12 am Title: Everybody here wanted somethin' more

This is awesome! I love how you've got Jim using his sales tactics to get the info about the purse. And the music content...Police, Fleetwood Mac. So good. Please give us more. There's so much mystery here.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2020 03:12 am Title: Everybody here wanted somethin' more

It’s great to see an update of this! Kevin the bartender is a wonderful version of Kevin. Jim just has a way with people, doesn’t he? Pam tags along with him despite herself, Kevin is convinced to spill his info... He can be a pretty charismatic dude when he wants to be. I’m a little nervous about the dodgy area they’re headed into...

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2020 03:07 am Title: Everybody here wanted somethin' more

Sweet chapter, dude. Especially the use of Kevin. Looking forward to learning more about these two alternate versions of our couple. Very much enjoying it.

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