1 [Report This]Date: March 20, 2020 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 11: Visitations
So proud of Pam! I love stories where we can see her transition into Fancy New Beesly. And i loved the line "he really needed to stop using the word 'engage.'" That's just such a perfect little way to kind of break your heart and I loved it. On to the next chapter, since you're spoiling me with two today!
Author's Response: Thank you! And you know, two updates was a result of having a chat. And you missed the chat. So if you were to say promise to make a chat, we might have another, and I might double update again.
Date: March 19, 2020 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 11: Visitations
Oh, I’m so glad that Pam is making the most of things whether or not she finds Jim. That’s the Fancy New Beesly that I love to see!
Not going to lie, I’m definitely not fact checking your info about rugby because that is not a particular knowledge area of mine. Cricket, on the other hand I can tell you is a summer sport & it’ll be less likely matches are on in winter... That’s my sports knowledge exhausted 😂
The lines about graphic design and “engage”. Ugh. So good in that way that only quality angst can be.
Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, I double-checked my rugby stuff with the internet, so you're off the hook! But thank you :)
Date: March 19, 2020 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 11: Visitations
The painting is really nice! And though I'm sorry for Jim, returning again and again to his 'Pam thoughts' (but just because they hurt him right now, not because it's wrong to think about Pam in general; the line about using the word 'engage' is particularly sad), I cheer for Pam and her decisions! Yay for Pam :)
And thank you for the fantastic update!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I looked up a bunch in that gallery and that one stuck with me. I'm glad you like it too!
And weirdly enough I really see Pam as being in a much better place in the immediate June aftermath than Jim. She's done something. He did too, but he doesn't know it worked yet...thanks for the review!
Date: March 19, 2020 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 11: Visitations
This is just full of gems. Jim gravitating to sports seems very natural. And just as natural to him is his thoughts going to pranking Dwight and having Pam as his partner-in-crime. Old habits die hard, though I'm sure eventually in this universe they won't have to die at all.
Love the Fancy New Beesly reference. I also love that she's doing things for herself, not just to find Jim. She's also finding herself and going for what she, and she alone wants. I'm sure that will pay dividends down the line.
Author's Response: Thank you Warrior! You always have such insightful comments, I can't do them justice in my replies.
Date: March 19, 2020 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 11: Visitations
It's so great to see this story continuing! Glad you didn't have coronavirus and that you're feeling better.
I'll admit I'm in knots about how Pam will ever find Jim.
Author's Response: Thank you! I promise she will, but I don't promise anything about how ;)