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Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2020 10:23 am Title: Chapter 16: Walking Tours

I'm about to read the next chapter but my jaw DROPPED when she saw him. This story is amazing, by the way, I love it. Makes me feel like I'm in Australia instead of on my couch during quarantine.

Author's Response: Thank you! I love hearing about people's reactions, and I'm glad you too are enjoying faux-touring Sydney at this particular point in time...w will get back to that, although there may be some more emotion- rather than action-heavy chapters coming.

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2020 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 16: Walking Tours

😱

Author's Response: ! Thanks!

Reviewer: HonestAndCourageous Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2020 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 16: Walking Tours

What?! Yes! So excited - not the path I thought this would take but better. I like how you've tied the drawing of the Sydney Opera House from earlier into this chapter as well as giving us Pam's perspective and feelings attached to her art. Lovely.
Thanks for writing, especially during such crazy times.

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate you catching the details like that, and I appreciate that you think this is better than you expected!

Reviewer: SprinklesTheCat Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2020 06:03 am Title: Chapter 16: Walking Tours

Ooh! They finally meet!

Author's Response: Indeed! Someday they'll even talk! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2020 03:04 am Title: Chapter 16: Walking Tours

Ahhhhh, I’m too excited about where this has ended to leave any sort of coherent review! Please post the next chapter asap!

Author's Response: It's up! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2020 02:53 am Title: Chapter 16: Walking Tours

Yay! It's the perfect place for them to meet! I suspected that they stayed in the same hostel (and somehow would meet there), but your way is sooo much better.
Perhaps, my joy is a tad early since they haven't spoken yet, but I'm just happy now :)

Author's Response: Thank you! If you'd like to see them speak, next chapter is up.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2020 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 16: Walking Tours

Ah! Sic em Pam!

I'm glad to see they're close to making contact.

Author's Response: Contact ahoy! Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2020 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 16: Walking Tours

So my theory proves correct. Yes, you would do that. Well done.

I was grinning ear to ear reading this whole chapter. Can't wait to see how their reunion goes. Wish I could be more eloquent, but I just sat back and enjoyed this one. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: I'm delighted to know you liked it! It's a real pleasure to know I can make you, who are always so eloquent in your comments, sit back and enjoy.

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