Date: March 26, 2020 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 18: Important Information
All the jellybeans!!! I absolutely love your writing
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: March 26, 2020 05:47 am Title: Chapter 18: Important Information
Yep, I'm still grinning :)
And it's especially nice that they have quite similar worries, expectations, and lines. They finally (I guess?) on the same wave, so yay for that!
Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate this a lot.
Date: March 26, 2020 03:29 am Title: Chapter 18: Important Information
Flying to Sydney counts as a fire walk as far as I’m concerned! This was great - Jim stunned, Pam getting to say what needed to be said. I’m glad to hear there’s still a bit to come...
Author's Response: I agree! And thank you :)
1 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2020 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 18: Important Information
I cannot wait for them to talk about everything. I love seeing what people come up with for original dialogue, especially when it relates to canon events. This story has been great, I love it immensely, I'm cheering them on even though I know they'll work it out by the end lol
Author's Response: Thanks! It's hard, but it's a lot of fun to find something new to say with these two, even if it's a predictable new.
Date: March 25, 2020 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 18: Important Information
Jim being kind of speechless and numb, but in a good way as he finds his way down to her seems very appropriate. This time she's dropped the bomb on him and he's the one stunned into silence.
I love that Pam turns the tables around with her lines from Casino Night. Great choice with her realizing it's her turn and just going for it. From first kiss, to each one knowing their lines, to this first words of really coming back to each other. Very cute, very romantic, very healing. I also love the fact we're still not done with this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun figuring out how she should talk to him.
1 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2020 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 18: Important Information
I'm glad things are looking up here. Your writing is great as always, nothing ever jumps out to trip me up while I'm reading this, keep up the good work. Somehow you always manage to get these out just as I'm settling in to read before bed, so cheers to that too.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate that. I hope this latest one wasn't too late for you...
Date: March 25, 2020 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 18: Important Information
No jellybeans left to give but this was great.i like the realistic awkwardness.
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate that, it's always a risk to toss in awkwardness, so thanks for the feedback.