Reviews For Date Line
Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2020 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 19: Arm in Arm
Date: March 27, 2020 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 19: Arm in Arm
A sweet update. The nod to Dwight brought a whole lot of humor to the emotion of the story. Nice to draw in those moments from canon/Jim’s barbecue too.
Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoy bringing canon in when I can, because it really is important to ground in the "real world."
Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2020 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 19: Arm in Arm
Date: March 26, 2020 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 19: Arm in Arm
Can’t wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! It's up now.
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2020 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 19: Arm in Arm
Date: March 26, 2020 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 19: Arm in Arm
Still tons of great lines. "It's a date," being a big highlight of course. Love that they can look back at some of their history with a new loving perspective now rather than regret.
Great fun as always.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's still going to be awkward in at least a few places, but they should I think end up in a good place.