Date: April 02, 2020 03:58 am Title: Chapter 25: I Scream for Ice Cream
Oh, I love that Pam is slightly more forgiving of Stamford knowing that it’s a promotion for Jim. That’s very sweet. They both really want the best for each other...
Author's Response: Thank you, and thanks for noticing that!
Date: April 02, 2020 12:19 am Title: Chapter 25: I Scream for Ice Cream
I love how they handled that situation!!! Keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thank you! More on the way!
Date: April 01, 2020 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 25: I Scream for Ice Cream
Things I like:
1) Lists;
2) Pam being not ready to move immediately after Jim, and Jim understanding that;
3) Pam's worries about holding Jim back from better career and life;
4) The amount of time between Jim ate ice cream and noticed its taste.
5) Cliffhangers and anticipation of what will be next!
Things I dislike:
1) This chapter ended.
Author's Response:
Things I appreciate:
1) This format
2) Your review
Things I hope you'll enjoy:
1) The next chapter.
Date: April 01, 2020 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 25: I Scream for Ice Cream
Well written to see Jim worried about everything there at the start. Also good to see him realize it's best to be honest with her. It may be hard at times, but it's usually worth the price.
Love Pam standing by him here. She's caring, supportive, and encouraging. Lovely to see her shine like that. Can't wait to see what kind of ram they'll pull from the thicket.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am enjoying writing this Pam, so it's good to hear your feedback on her.
1 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2020 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 25: I Scream for Ice Cream
Uh oh. Are they sending Dwight?
Another just in time for bedtime reading update... Though to be fair I pretty much read all day now.
Author's Response: I also write these before bed, so that seems like a non-coincidence. I hope you are enjoying! Thanks for the review.