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Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2020 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 27: A Long Walk

Haha, two people, one hostel is definitely something. It could be a whole new trope on its own...
This was a super sweet chapter. Their teasing banter is spot on. I love how they’re talking about serious types of things, but the humor is still there. Just lovely.

Author's Response: It could be...we'll see what I do with it. Thank you for the review, I really appreciate what you had to say there :)

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2020 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 27: A Long Walk

I knew it! Knew it!
*repeat the kitchen jig*
And I'm very curious about how do you play out this trope :)
Oh, and this direct side of Pam is a little bit scary. Nice and thrilling, but still scary...
I'm excited to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Good guess! I'm glad you're enjoying! And this will stay T-for-Teen, but I do promise there will be Implications down the line

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2020 07:59 am Title: Chapter 27: A Long Walk

The exact same hostel? 🤣 This is great. Love it

Author's Response: Somehow yes! Thank you :)

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2020 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 27: A Long Walk

I suspected, and was correct! It's a small world after all.

I really liked the banter this chapter. Tired Pam is always cute.

Author's Response: Good guess! I really wanted to tell all of you who guessed it that you were right, but I figured finding out would be more fun. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2020 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 27: A Long Walk

Love the Jim face at the end there. Also glad the suspicions proved correct about their accommodations. Nice set up earlier. I foresee the payoff to be delightful.

Pam getting Jim all flustered was all sorts of adorable. I mean just how many times can she knock his socks off? What are we up to now? Three? Four? Is there a Guinness World Record of Number of Times Jim Halpert can be Flummoxed she's trying to go for? My bet is yes.

Wonderful as always.

Author's Response: Thank you! Good guessing, as usual. I am enjoying flummoxing Jim, as I imagine Pam would, so there may be a few more coming...

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