Reviews For Date Line
You must login (register) to review or leave jellybeans
Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07, 2020 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 30: Planning

Awww, Jim's thoughts about Pam's beauty are so sweet!
And I hope they'll see kangaroos after all :)

Author's Response: Thanks! They will, though it might take a couple of chapters to get there.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07, 2020 04:16 am Title: Chapter 30: Planning

I don’t know how one would get to the botanic gardens exactly (because I tend to be on foot or in a car in these places) but I can tell you if they’re intending on catching public transport the chances of it being late or not running at all are very, very high in Sydney... Just a super “fun” fact...

This chapter was absolutely delightful - particularly Jim’s “gah” and “um.” Hilarious. This Pam is a whole lot of fun. She’s lighter somehow, and I love how she feels that way, without you having to step out that she is that way. If that makes sense...

Author's Response: TRAIN! I love trains. It's a long journey though, so I'm definitely taking advantage of your fun fact. Thank you for the review! It's nice to know she's coming across that way.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2020 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 30: Planning

Gob-smacked Jim was a delight. No other word for it there. He's still in shock from everything and it come off as adorable.

Good on Pam for stepping up to the plate. Quick little stumble there with the "out of our...Roy's place." However it's a great little character moment. Old habits die hard so quick slip-ups like that are bound to happen.

Good on Jim to not make a big deal of it though. They're both just enjoying each other's company and it's lovely to see.

Author's Response: I love writing gobsmacked Jim. It's so fun! And yeah, there's no way Pam's not still thinking of it partly as her place. No matter how much she's moving on. And she definitely is.

You must login (register) to review or leave jellybeans