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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2020 05:19 am Title: Chapter 31: Waiting for a Train

Oh, it's so nice to see how comfortable Pam feels around Jim. That she can be concentrated, silly, playful, and it won't cause her to feel guilt or something like that. I think this 'spring feeling' was something that they both needed so much in their lives.
Lovely, lovely, lovely!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I think this is the time that if it had happened Pam would have felt best about it--fresh off the strength of breaking up with Roy (the way I describe it at least, where it's a good faith effort and a fairly reasonable break). 

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07, 2020 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 31: Waiting for a Train

Ok. I’m just going to attach a verbal jellybean to each chapter.

So here: jellybean

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it :)

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07, 2020 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 31: Waiting for a Train

Haha, I’m glad you could put my knowledge of our subpar public transport system to use!

Describing Pam’s laugh in terms of the seasons was lovely. Such a beautiful description. Their banter continues to be all sorts of adorable. Nice to see the Halpert Helper make another appearance. Onwards to the fluffy creatures!

Author's Response:

Oh, I am going to use that to the hilt. Thank you! 

Fluffy creatures soon--first, my own transit errors in Sydney. 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07, 2020 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 31: Waiting for a Train

Gah! Why do I not have any jellybeans left! If anyone out there is reading this and can jelly bean this chapter, please, make it like the Easter bunny tripped and fell all over this chapter.

I mean, this was just pure simple, grin inducing, fun. Of course Jim is a better boyfriend than, *cough him cough*. I love how Jim is being respectful of her in several ways and at the same time giving as good as he gets in regards to her teasing.

Him finding the Halpert Helper was a hoot. As was all of their banter here. Still great fun.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I always take it as a point of pride if I can run you out of those before I run out of story. I hope you keep enjoying!

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