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Reviewer: BigTuna Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2020 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 36: Venues

Just got all caught up and I don’t have much to say that hasn’t already been said. This is so lovely, as all your stories are, and I am going to miss it when it is complete! I love Australian Jim and Pam. You write such complete versions of them no matter the setting. Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate that. It means a lot coming from you!

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2020 11:42 am Title: Chapter 36: Venues

Awww, it's so sad that this perfect idyllic mood was ruined by this lady. But I hope they'll have (apart from necessary angst) some meaningful conversations and more happy fluffiness!

Author's Response: Well, the conversation will wait a bit, so more fluff to come. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2020 08:34 am Title: Chapter 36: Venues

Every chapter is so great! Jellybean

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2020 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 36: Venues

They are just so considerate of each other. Jim anticipating Pam’s sketchbook filling up. Pam encouraging him to try something new. Jim offering to be her sounding board as needed. There’s angst in every relationship, but I suspect that these two are on the right track...

Author's Response: Thank you! I think they'll get there, don't you?

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2020 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 36: Venues

Just what the doctor ordered, a shot of fluff before bed!

As much as I don't like angst, I am looking forward to seeing Pam unload the emotional burden that she's been carrying.

Looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Well, it will happen, but not quite yet. More fluff soon! Thanks :)

Reviewer: HonestAndCourageous Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2020 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 36: Venues

Of course Pam needs to deal with all of these feelings... she's been through quite a lot in a short time! Glad she has Jim's support. Looking forward to seeing how they work it out.
Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: She's still dealing slowly though, so I'm afraid the conversation will wait a bit...but it will happen. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2020 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 36: Venues

This was a nice update. I can't wait to see how their conversation goes. Angsty, but awesome. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm afraid it will be a little before Pam's ready for that, but it will happen! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2020 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 36: Venues

"Best art of all the art," nice reuse of that line and in a much MUCH nicer context. Kinda fun to see Jim putting pencil to paper there. Yes he's nervous and clearly hasn't progressed past middle school art classes. However I'm sure Pam appreciates him trying. Here's something she can truly teach him, rather than him faxing being bad like stick shift lessons.

Yes the whole Stamford discussion does need to happen still. The fluff is fun, and their feelings are growing. However as Pam put here, honesty is important. However knowing you, I'm sure it'll all work out in the end.

Author's Response: Thank you! The fluff will continue but I do want to keep that Stamford discussion in the back of our minds...

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