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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2020 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 37: Walk Back

Oh, I have a feeling there is the sword of Damocles above Pam's head... poor girl...
But. But! Even more than The Conversation (if it would be The Conversation and not just talk), I'd like to see what they found in the mall!

Author's Response: I think she'll survive somehow. But the mall is up!

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2020 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 37: Walk Back

I’m with you there, Pam has used a whole lot of strength lately. It makes all the sense in the world that she needs some time to regroup before diving into anything too contentious...
Klicks or ks is a very Aussie way to chat about distances so Jim’s blending in like a local. Although for some reason that makes no sense, I feel like we write it as “clicks” (but that just could be me...)

Author's Response: I think that's valuable for her, to have the strength at this point. And yeah, I see it spelled either way but I liked the weirder spelling ;) Thanks!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2020 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 37: Walk Back

So a nice little filler chapter here. goo balance between speaking and thinking. Lots of fun little bits sprinkled throughout as well. I do like that Pam's thoughts. She's right. A lot of her courage did get used up just to get to this point. Relax and take a breather. Let the relationship grow a little more and then take on Stamford.

Author's Response: Thank you! I pride myself on my fillers of course ;)

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