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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2020 09:11 am Title: Chapter 38: The Mall

Aww, I also always buy sweets in foreign stores. Or, rather, always bought...
*sobbing quietly*
Anyway, I like how Pam and Jim continue to discover little things about each other. It feels like a ground (already quite a solid ground) for their further relationships.
Thank you for the story!

Author's Response:

SAME! So much so, and I'm so sad I can't right now. Living vicariously...

Thank you for reading! 

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2020 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 38: The Mall

Hmmmm What’s Jim gonna buy??

Jellybean!!!!

Author's Response: Exactly what you think ;). Thanks!!!!

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2020 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 38: The Mall

Wait. Do you guys not have Cherry Ripes? That’s... I’m sorry. You’re missing out.
You’ve captured the quintessential Australian shopping centre experience well here. There’s one of the shops you listed in just about every centre. Although, H&M hasn’t been around here all that long. Maybe only the past 5 years?
It seems Jim has had a bit of quiet revelation, impacting on his own shopping experience just a little bit... Slipping into a jewelry store after a whole like 2 days is very in canon...
I’m very curious to see if he purchases what we all maybe suspect, or something a little different...

Author's Response: Nope! No one else but you has them, unfortunately. And thanks! I was working from the actual shopping centre map, but I'm glad to know I chose typical stores :). Thanks for the review, and the good guess!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2020 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 38: The Mall

Hmmmm, a Swarovski shop. I have images of a certain canon talking head with Jim holding up a pretty thing combined with this AU and an accelerated time line. Either that or just something nice for her. Both ways would be very cute nonetheless.

I love how much easier and freer Pam feels with Jim. This early after calling off the wedding, I'm sure there would be lots of those comparison type thoughts. Love that she's finding things so much better now that she's following her heart without reservation.

Author's Response: Yeah, it's not hard to guess is it? Not everything is super subtle ;) Thanks for the review!

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