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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2020 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 40: Dinner

That's a shame that Dwight's sacrifice won't work :( Hey, maybe they take Ryan instead? He's fancy enough for Stamford...
Anyway, can't wait till morning to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Yeah, but what would this hypothetical S3 be without Dwight? Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2020 03:51 am Title: Chapter 40: Dinner

Talking about it, and talking about it in a way that isn’t all that angsty - that works for me!
The only logical(ish) swap I can fathom is Ryan, but even that’s a stretch. I do wonder what the actual solution you’ll come up with will be...

Author's Response: I do have one in mind, but it may or may not feel reasonable; hopefully I'll make it work. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2020 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 40: Dinner

Jellybean!!! And now I have a craving for cherry coke

Author's Response: Thank you! And so do I (maybe minus the vodka).

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2020 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 40: Dinner

Thanks for not leaving us hanging with the whole Stamford thing. While it's been fun to see them out and about, it's their biggest issue right now and one that's not going away anytime soon. So yeah, good to see them talking about it.

Other than that, delightful banter between the two of them. The open flirtation is a lot of fun. Also nice that they can now transition to a more serious topic without losing a feeling of togetherness.

Author's Response: I mean, it'll take a bit to resolve, but it's important to keep them at least a little on topic. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2020 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 40: Dinner

I'm looking forward to the Stamford resolution. Is it rude for me to wish harm or calamity upon fictional characters? I'm thinking the Stamford receptionist could do with one.

Author's Response: That's a good idea. Let's see if they come up with it ;). And thanks for the review!

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