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Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2020 01:20 am Title: Chapter 44: Sky Walking

One bed! Two characters! AKA the dream! Seriously, please, please, please for the sake of my trope loving heart have them wake up wrapped up in one another... Or not, you do you. Whatever it is, I’m sure it will be just perfect - much like this chapter. Also, I feel you on the time zones, it’s the worst. We’re just in a whole other world (the future) down here.

Author's Response: I hope this satisfied your trope love, as it did mine. Thank you, O future one, for your review!

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2020 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 44: Sky Walking

Wait, wait, wait... So, are they actually going to spend their first night together sleeping? Hold on, I need to celebrate that!
*rising a mug, dancing dance and scaring a cat in the process*
Also, I like Jim's book preferences :) And the thing that both of them didn't know what time/date is - that's so, so relatable...
Excellent chapter, fantastic story and I'm dying to see what happens next :)

Author's Response: Maaaaaaaaaybe. Though technically this is their second night dating ;). Thank you!

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2020 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 44: Sky Walking

Jellybean!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2020 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 44: Sky Walking

Ah, a little resume massage never hurt anybody! It'll be interesting to see how they rope Ryan into the plan, looking forward to that.

I enjoyed the date and time discussion. As someyeho has trouble with timezones just in North America, I can relate to that sentiment.

Looking forward to more, keep up the good work. You are always out with an update before reading in bed for me, so I really appreciate it.

Author's Response: I hope this most recent one managed to hit your bedtime still, even if it was a bit late! Thanks :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2020 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 44: Sky Walking

Another sit back and grin chapter. Sports references, paraphrasing civics lessons, Star Wars, all wrapped up with adorable JAM-ness, what's not to love?

Sleep tight you two. You've got the rest of forever to plot and scheme.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed, and I hope you like the next one too!

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