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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2020 01:44 am Title: Chapter 45: The Morning After

Apparently, deep inside, I'm still a teenage girl because I couldn't stop giggling while I was reading this chapter.
Not a bad morning at all!

Author's Response:

So was I and I never was a teenage girl, so...

Thanks! 

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2020 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 45: The Morning After

Adorable! You’ve well and truly scratched that trope itch...

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to hear it.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2020 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 45: The Morning After

"and he’d needed to change the subject or not stand up for an hour."

Another one of your gem lines that just makes one grin.

Loved that they just collapsed into a small bed and passed out. Even more fun is the size of the bed which of course means they're pressed so close to each other. Calls of nature not withstanding, also fun to imagine them just tumbling off the side in mess of sheets, arms, and Pam's flyaway hair. Loved that.

Also that she just cuts him off with a kiss like that. Even on waking she's still going for that Guinness World Record of Number of times Jim Halpert can be befuddled. Go get it Pam.

Yup, that's a pretty good morning all the way around.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think this is a fun day for them. At least I hope.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2020 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 45: The Morning After

You were indeed in time for bedtime yet again.

One does wonder why Dwight rarely fact checks Jim with a quick google.

Enjoyable and well written as always. Looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Thank you! And I think Dwight enjoys the game as much as Jim...

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2020 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 45: The Morning After

Awwww! Jellybeans

Author's Response: Thanks! 

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