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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2020 11:53 am Title: Chapter 46: Breakfast

I'm slightly embarrassed to confess, but I had to google to get the 'Friggitoria' joke... The educational function of fanfiction as it is, and I love this!
Also the whole line 'I already knew everything I needed to know about Australia before I came here' is so sweet... but Pam is kinda not the best tourist in the world :)

Author's Response: I mean, she's not. At least in this story. And it's always fascinating to know what is American-specific slang! Thanks :)

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2020 12:07 am Title: Chapter 46: Breakfast

Umm... I had to look “frigg” up on Urban Dictionary to make any sense of the jokes about the restaurant name. So, thanks for that education I guess. I feel like Pam doesn’t have to worry too much about saying it in public - I don’t think it’s common slang here at all. (Or maybe that’s just me, who knows).
That was a super sweet end to the chapter!

Author's Response: Interesting to find out what's American-specific slang! But I don't think Pam any more than I would know that Australians don't use it ;). Thanks!

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2020 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 46: Breakfast

Aww 🥰

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2020 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 46: Breakfast

I really enjoyed the back and forth in this chapter, and the ending line was a jem.

Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoyed writing it :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2020 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 46: Breakfast

Lovely way to get them going to breakfast, though it's also lunch time now considering how long they slept, so brunch? Sure, we'll call it that, yes? Yes.

Delightful banter between them as well as an adorable line there at the end.

Author's Response: Yes, brunch. The place in question opens at 10 am. Thank you!

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