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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2020 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 47: Tickets

It seems like they'll have pretty busy days, but I'm wondering how much attention, in fact, they'll pay to rugby, opera, and another rugby?
I have a feeling that not so much...

Author's Response: Thank you! You'll see ;)

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2020 07:10 am Title: Chapter 47: Tickets

I just love this story and the way they interact with each other. Keep the chapters coming!

Jellybean

Author's Response: Thank you! I will.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2020 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 47: Tickets

This is just so lovely. You’ve described the easiness that they have with each other so well. This chapter was just a breath of fresh air in my day. Definitely still enjoying them!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really enjoyed writing it so I'm glad it worked for you!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2020 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 47: Tickets

You impress me every chapter with the quality of your writing. Jim and Pam always feel so in character and this chapter is no exception.

I really enjoyed how you described the moment of Pam leaning against Jim as just being, because to me it was like "Pam, this is what was missing, this is what a healthy relationship feels like".

Keep up the good work, and hats off to you for managing to get daily updates out.

Author's Response: Thank you! As you can see some of the updates are getting shorter ;). But I find it actually helps to keep to the schedule, so that I keep up momentum.

Reviewer: HonestAndCourageous Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2020 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 47: Tickets

Absolutely, I am (still enjoying this)! In reply to your note! I'm glad it's not ending yet, and I'm having a good time meandering around Sydney with these two!
As always, their dialogue is spot on. I feel as if we are getting to see so much of who they are off camera that we didn't get to see in the show, eventhough none of this happened in the series.
I also am totally out of jellybeans (have been for a long time), but I keep clicking that box just in case, because you deserve them!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you find this realistic, because I was a bit worried it would seem too much too soon.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2020 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 47: Tickets

Considering how long this story is by now, it can sometimes be a challenge to remember they're been together less than a week at this point. Good introspection on Jim's part. I love seeing his relief and delight that things are going so well with Pam.

Likewise it's good to see her acknowledge some of the harm done in the past and attempt to reconcile it. They're caring for each other in lovely ways and it's a joy to read.

Same with the quiet moment looking at the Opera House. Just a wonderful moment that adds to just how nicely you've got them paired together.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, it's hard for me to remember at times too--but we're roughly 2 days into their actual relationship. Doo doo doo doo doo.

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