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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2020 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 48: Rugby Union

Okay, to be honest, I didn't expect at all that artsy-fartsy Pam Beesly was (and is) such a sports fan. But, I guess, it's quite logical (unexpected, but still logical) and it's nice to look at the character from a different angle :)

Author's Response: I think she'd have to be, to survive relationships with those guys. Also remember who said she was artsy-fartsy! But thanks :)

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2020 08:59 am Title: Chapter 48: Rugby Union

What a sweet last lin
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Author's Response: Aww, thanks!

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2020 04:36 am Title: Chapter 48: Rugby Union

How do you manage to inject a moment of pure sweetness into every chapter without it coming across too cheesy? Somehow you make it work every time. This was lovely. I like Pam’s enthusiasm for a sport she doesn’t really understand, and all the justification as to why that may be.
I’m looking forward to seeing how they go with Ryan/Jan!

Author's Response: Thank you! I think it's the pacing that lets me do that--an update a day means it feels longer between moments than it is.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2020 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 48: Rugby Union

Great to see that they can enjoy a sports game like this. Yes they're making up for lost time, and in the best ways possible.

Short and sweet this time, but still good.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think this would actually be the ideal early date for them, so I hope it worked for you!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2020 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 48: Rugby Union

Short but sweet. Not really much else to say about this one. Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Thank you! We'll have more meat soon, I promise!

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