Date: April 26, 2020 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 49: Phone Call Part 1
This chapter made me sure of three things:
1) Cliffhangers are good only when you're sure there will be the continuation soon;
2) I'd like to see more cunning plans from Jim and Pam! I have no doubts they are a perfect team, but knowing and watching - two different things :)
3) I dislike Ryan. I dislike him so much that I'll write a story in which I'll kill him the most devious way I could invent. That's my (belated) resolution.
Author's Response:
1) I hope that this lived up to that.
2) See 1.
3) Me too! Please please please write that.
Thank you!
Date: April 26, 2020 05:44 am Title: Chapter 49: Phone Call Part 1
That's somehow fitting that Kelly would be right there and also attempt to Shanghai the conversation a bit. I also like that Jim and Pam planned out what was going to be said to make sure things go well. After all that time plotting together against Dwight, translating those skills to get Ryan on the line doesn't seem like much of a stretch.
Both Jim and Pam have a peg on Ryan though. Him being the kind of guy who will poke at people for fun. Thing is Ryan's a bit more intelligent than their usual targets so this more deft way of handling things seems to work well.
Author's Response: Thank you! I feel like they would instinctively plot. And I hope you enjoy the rest of it.
Date: April 26, 2020 03:54 am Title: Chapter 49: Phone Call Part 1
I wasn’t expecting to love your Ryan, because... Ryan. But, I thought you captured him really well. I really liked his double meaning laced conversation with Jim. It’s nice to see Jim in master salesmen mode!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hate him too!
Date: April 26, 2020 12:17 am Title: Chapter 49: Phone Call Part 1
This story has been just a constant pleasure to read each day-ish or so! You've been amazing at updates and your research is certainly not going unnoticed! It's so detailed and precise, but in a way that stays in line with the characters. Wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate hearing that, and I'm really glad you're along for the ride!
Date: April 25, 2020 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 49: Phone Call Part 1
Jellybean!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: April 25, 2020 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 49: Phone Call Part 1
Hook, line, and sinker. The two master manipulators of the office face off. Tune in next time when we find out... Who. Is. Deadliest.
I have no clue why I'm reviewing in the format of deadliest Warrior.
Author's Response: I think we all know who is deadliest. Thanks for the review!