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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2020 11:21 am Title: Chapter 50: Phone Call, Part 2

I adore your take on Ryan, by the way, and also on Kelly's attitude towards Ryan.

Author's Response: Thank you! I have Opinions about Ryan, so it's nice to have a chance to express them in this way.

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2020 11:11 am Title: Chapter 50: Phone Call, Part 2

Yep, as I thought, it was amazing! I have a feeling that with Jan they'll change the tactic. Also, I have a feeling that I just need to sit and wait :)
Oh, I was thinking about Operation Indiana (or Operation 'Switch the Idol'), but then I remembered that in the movie it didn't work well, so I ran out of ideas :/

Author's Response: Thank you! 

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2020 03:22 am Title: Chapter 50: Phone Call, Part 2

“Bring a trowel.” That’s the laugh I needed today. Perfect Dwight is perfect.
Ah, a casual “I love you” - that gets me right in the feels.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) 

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2020 12:38 am Title: Chapter 50: Phone Call, Part 2

Jellybeans!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2020 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 50: Phone Call, Part 2

Or as Michael would call it, the J Situation.

I enjoyed the duel, although Ryan didn't know that it was, so he didn't get to fight back.

And of course always the fluff at the end. Always appreciated.

Edit: Reapostee because mobile hates me and autocorrects everything wrong.

Author's Response: Ironically this time autocorrect didn't correct "reposted." But thank you!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2020 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 50: Phone Call, Part 2

Operation Homecoming? Operation Bait and Switch? Operation Thank-God-We-Don't-Have-to-Endure-Needless-Angst-and-Can-Just-Enjoy-Jim-and-Pam-Being-Happy? Yeah, okay that one's a bit much. Hmmmm. I've got it! Operation Restitutio. You've been having us all go on Google hunts this whole story. Your turn.

Salesman Jim was on full display here. With of course I'm sure a ton of help from Pam's perspective. Great to see Jim lead Ryan down that line of thinking. Even better to get Dwight involved. If Dwight's training is anything like what we saw in canon, I'm sure nothing would please Ryan more than getting as far away from any seeds Dwight would want to plant in him.

Love that Pam can just be happy like that with him. It's a joy to read.

Author's Response:

Is there an Office reference there I'm missing? Because I know the Latin word, but I don't see any further than that...

 Thank you! 

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2020 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 50: Phone Call, Part 2

First of all, congrats on 50 chapters!! That's amazing!! I also love how Jim and Pam know exactly how to word things in order to get Ryan to do what they want. And making Dwight train Ryan in order to drive Ryan out is genius lol.

Author's Response: Thank you! It is of course easier to write 50 chapters when they average less than 1000 words each ;). Thank you for the compliment about the Dwight strategy--I had to think long and hard about that. 

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