Date: April 29, 2020 03:12 am Title: Chapter 52: A Brief and Similar Follow-Up
“It was a nice morning, too.” It’s never a bad time to include this line! A very nice touch.
Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoyed adding it ;)
Date: April 29, 2020 12:02 am Title: Chapter 52: A Brief and Similar Follow-Up
The emotional part of my brain: *doesn't even bother to stop giggling*
The rational part of my brain: oh my gosh, koalas. Koalas! How could I forget about koalas? I hope once they finish dealing with Jan and whole Stamford turmoil, they'll remember they are tourists (!) in Australia (!) and have some time to see koalas.
Author's Response: I think they will remember. After all, what else would they have to think about? Thank you for the review!
Date: April 28, 2020 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 52: A Brief and Similar Follow-Up
Make all the canon jokes you want. Nice way to get into their heads after their excellent evening. Jim being surprised at first to be in bed with Pam was cute. Pam being more than pleased to be in bed with Jim was lovely.
Next time I'll use Norwegian or Zulu to suggest an operation name. Because I care.
Author's Response:
Please do. I enjoy trying to figure out what you mean ;)
And thank you! I hope you like the next chapter when we get back to plot.
Date: April 28, 2020 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 52: A Brief and Similar Follow-Up
"A nice morning too" is one of my all time favorite Jam moments it makes me laugh and my heart explode at the same time so I'm all for you adding it in lol great chapter!!
Author's Response: :) Thank you!