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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2020 09:02 am Title: Chapter 55: Beethoven

Awww, how being in love changes people! And it's lovely that they can talk even about things they consider embarrassing.
Very sweet chapter!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2020 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 55: Beethoven

Jim sleeping through a concert sounds quite fun. Nice way to introduce a minor character flaw for him. Well not so much introduce since we did kind of get how he acted during the finer things club. Nice refference there by the way. However, it's also a good way to expand on that and show him growing.

Loved that Pam is there engaged with the music. More people need to be exposed to the true masters of music and I'm glad Pam is getting Jim engaged. Also glad that Jim is open and honest with her. Shows they're starting their relationship out right.

Bravo!

Author's Response: Thank you! I think Jim can't be perfect, even if I like it when JAM as a whole is. 

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