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Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2020 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 62: Pool

Really looking forward to the back in Scranton stuff coming up, Australia's been fun, but the rest of the ensemble could use some love!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope it will live up to it.

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2020 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 62: Pool

Oh, I hope that this little 'swimsuit' exchange resolved all remained Booze Cruise issues!
And that Jim had another chance to see Pam's polka dot two pieces (I suppose, it's one of her remained swimsuits, right?)
Lovely as ever!

Author's Response: I think it did. Thank you! And yes, I'm sure he will get a chance (though maybe not in this fic explicitly).

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2020 05:00 am Title: Chapter 62: Pool

Oh I loved that Pam bought a more conservative swim suit for the booze cruise. That totally tracks. Although, given the time of year, a wetsuit wouldn’t have been a terrible idea! I also love that she opted to wear it, as the more sentimental choice, with Jim.

All your talk about how moderate the weather is in Sydney in winter - it wouldn’t feel that way to the poor Australians. I can’t stand winter! It’s far too cold. Sydney in winter is absolutely freezing*

*to me, who finds anything less than 20 degrees celsius far, far too cold.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I appreciate that you liked that detail! 

And the average temp in Scranton in February is about half the temp in Sydney in June...so I think he'd find it moderate as can be for winter. 

Reviewer: homemadejam Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2020 03:32 am Title: Chapter 62: Pool

The bit with Kelly’s swim suit being a bit less made me grin, so I can understand why Jim and Pam would.
A fun and flirty chapter that made me smile :)

Author's Response: Thank you! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2020 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 62: Pool

The copier, right. Don't you mean the reception desk? Reviewing as I read here so there might be something later on I haven't read, but we'll get to that in time.

Love that even after their intimate times together at this point, Jim is still entranced by the thought of Pam in a swimsuit. Lovely detail.

Again a nice way of bandaging the hurts of the past with Pam explaining her choice of swimwear. I really like that even though it's still a new dating relationship, they still have years of prior friendship to fall back on which makes things fun.

I also have this image of Pam looking up at Jim during that conversation and at the end Jim jumping over her head and landing in the pool in a cannonball right next to her simply for the five year old joy of it. After all I think I read somewhere that according to man law, a man never enters a pool by the stairs or the ladder. But that's me.

Great job as always.

Author's Response: I mean, the copier is right past the reception desk...and thank you! I think Jim would wait for her at least, so that he wouldn't splash her too much.

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2020 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 62: Pool

Nice and fluffy!

Jellybeans!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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