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Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2020 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 72: Merger Part 2

I liked the contrasting perspectives on Jan there, something that we never get to see directly addressed, so nice to see that here.

I'm also thankful for friend Karen, maybshe live long and prosper.

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your attention the details :)

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2020 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 72: Merger Part 2

Oh, wow. I'm not sure, but... did Karen just gave them her blessing? Or, at least, it was how I felt reading that moment...
I hope their apartment hunt would be successful!

Author's Response: That is how I wrote it; she doesn't have any reason to be jealous in this storyline. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2020 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 72: Merger Part 2

It’s so strange and so very nice to have a Karen that has absolutely no history with Jim, not even mere acquaintances from Stamford. I like it. I like that it gives Pam the opportunity to branch out into friendship with Karen on her own terms.

Author's Response: Right? It's a very different dynamic since she meets them at the same time. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2020 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 72: Merger Part 2

Okay so this time it wasn't a co-worker who looked at me strange when I burst out laughing. It was my wife. I'm not sure which one is better or worse. It was the hydrochloric and sulfuric acid line that did it in case you want to know. I love those more intellectual type jokes you manage to put in. Keep 'em coming.

Good interaction with Karen. Looks like a nice setup for a good friendship between them.

Author's Response: Hah! Thank you; I will endeavor to keep them coming.

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