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Reviewer: HonestAndCourageous Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2020 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 73: A Benihana Christmas

Great to see Jim, Pam and Karen all on the same team as friends, yet still in character with the show.
I also like that conversation between Karen and Pam about Ryan. Muppet indeed!
Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you found it in character--I worry as the AU moves on that they might drift.

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2020 02:48 am Title: Chapter 73: A Benihana Christmas

The best version of season 3 I've ever read. Now it's official :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate that a lot!

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2020 02:01 am Title: Chapter 73: A Benihana Christmas

Despite the canon angst, Benihana Christmas may just be one of my favorite episodes. This was such a lovely redo of it. Having Karen move in with Mark was definitely unexpected, but I really like it. It’ll be great when Pam and Jim find a place too!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I could please a fan of it :)

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2020 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 73: A Benihana Christmas

Nice spin on the CIA prank, I liked that.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2020 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 73: A Benihana Christmas

Nice way to incorporate your new AU with some canon elements. It's nice to see Karen as a friend here.

Even more fun that Jim could be a part of the fun planning the CIA prank rather than just coming in at the tail end of it.

Hopefully the Jim and Pam living together thing resolves fairly soon. I'm sure Izzy would like to have her couch back. Unless Pam's spending most nights at Jim's place, which is also feasible.

Author's Response: Thank you! I believe the next chapter will resolve it--and I agree, that's a long couch-surf.

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