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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 74: Back from Vacation

Is it normal that I already kinda ship Mark and Karen? Perhaps, it would be a disaster, but still...
Also, Pam and Jim's blushing game is adorable. And it's wonderful that there are houses with terraces in Scranton!

Author's Response: Thank you! I also do, just for this fic, although mostly as friends not as lovers. 

Reviewer: homemadejam Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 07:38 am Title: Chapter 74: Back from Vacation

I love the idea of Karen going around with them, being her rational self. The way she fits in with their lives in this season 3 is excellent!

Author's Response: I think that's what Karen could have been if they hadn't had her date Jim--she's a nice balance to the rest of the cast dynamic when she's not being jealous or jumpy.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 02:21 am Title: Chapter 74: Back from Vacation

Aww, a terrace! Plus, a redo jinx with 100% less angst. Such fun. I’m glad they’ve found the perfect place.

Author's Response: Thank you! Minimal angst is the goal at this point!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2020 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 74: Back from Vacation

"And anyway, while Pam was over most nights, it wasn’t the same as living together."

*Insert sarcastic Dr. Evil voice * Riiight.

Just kidding of course. Still a nice bit of private at home banter there at the start. They really do have a lot of fun bouncing off each other like that. It's adorable to read.

Very cute with the house. Nice OC's that added flavor to the chapter. Even more fun with the terrace. Looks like they found a great place.

Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoyed the OCs--they may be a little based on my neighbors...

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2020 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 74: Back from Vacation

I was worried about you, almost broke your streak!

Lovely update, from the adorable kid to the house, I enjoyed it immensely. The jinx was another nice touch.

Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun with it. And I might be late, but I have too much invested right now to skip this (watch me fail anyway for some random reason now)...

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