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Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2020 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 77: Cocktails

I bet that talking about art is much more fun than joking about previous boyfriends!
And, I guess, I might be a liiittle more helpful for Jim's career :)

Author's Response: Right? That was a mediocre at best prank, Karen. And thanks :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2020 08:52 am Title: Chapter 77: Cocktails

Short and sweet to be sure. Like others have said, it's a treat to watch this version of Jim and Pam mingle. So much less tension. It's just wonderful to read.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2020 01:54 am Title: Chapter 77: Cocktails

This is so much nicer than the canon evening with Karen. I like that you had Pam connect with David Wallace’s wife. It’s so lovely to find Pam and Jim in a relationship where they both feel supported, you brought this out really well throughout this chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think their relationship needs to move, don't you? And in this case, I want it to move towards support and comfort, not angst.

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2020 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 77: Cocktails

Glad Pam has something to do there, I was worried she'd be bored while Jim shot hoops!

Jumping back to the start of the chapter, I really loved the mutual support thing they have going on there.

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate you noticing the small things at the start :)

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