Reviews For The Swimsuit
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Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2020 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hot! I like stories where they don’t “go all the way” and find stolen moments like these so fun to read. Great job!

Reviewer: Ava Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2020 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I just really appreciate you for giving those untied shorts the recognition they deserve ;)
For what it's worth, I wouldn't be mad at a follow up either!

Reviewer: Donnamour1969 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2020 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think I loved this as much as Jim did😉

Reviewer: Guten Schriftsteller Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2020 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Damn this is so hot

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. 😊

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2020 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Somehow I figured that suit jacket, shirt, tie, and swimsuit combo wouldn't go unnoticed here in the forum for to long. Well done. Great to see them still so affectionate with each other. Great way to steal a moment together as well as plan for more later.

Delightful.

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words. Yeah, there was way too much fodder in those videos - I couldn't let it go to waste!

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2020 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sprinkles. Sprinkles. Isolation is doing weird things to me, & I’ve discovered if I put sunscreen on it feels like I’m at the beach & not in my backyard which lifts my spirits. I literally just put it on & read this & it made it feel all the more real - which look, sounds a little insane, but somehow I’m now in the most summery mood & thank you for this.
This was just great. A perfect balance of sweet & steamy. If you wanted to follow up on that whole Penny taking the kids for pizza thing, I wouldn’t be mad...

Author's Response:

This made me laugh out loud! I wondered if anyone would want the follow up. I have to think about that...

 Thank you for the kind words. It was fun to write. 

 

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