8 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2006 01:56 pm Title: Confidential
This was very cute! I love how they're not letting the awkward stuff get between them, and there's a hope that things could get better later...
9 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2006 09:54 am Title: Confidential
Without looking away, with his eyes still locked on hers, Jim said "You know, I think Pam can make her own decisions."
You know, that made me melt a bit, myself. I'm not sure how she didn't fling herself into his arms at that very moment.
I love how this shows them tentatively finding their balance between friendship and something more. Nice voices, cute idea- lovely work!
9 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2006 08:00 am Title: Confidential
Very well-written. I liked your use of Roy here, and his (attempted) use of Jim. Glad to see things aren't too awkward between my favourite (eventual?) couple.
Date: November 02, 2006 02:34 pm Title: Confidential
Really nice killersharky! Seems right in line with some awkward situation Roy would put Jim in.
It says it's not complete so I'm hoping there will be more. (Now get typing for Nano!)
10 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2006 01:10 pm Title: Confidential
Gotta big smile on my face now. Adorable!
8 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2006 01:02 pm Title: Confidential
loved it. I so love their banter and the way Jim handled Roy.
Date: November 02, 2006 01:00 pm Title: Confidential
It was like that one secret that just belonged to them, and even they couldn't speak it.
A jewel of a line, and encapsulates the whole piece. Well done.