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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2020 11:40 am Title: Check up on Adam 10

Okay, I am hooked. Very interested to learn the facts underlying the Jim-Pam-Roy dynamic here, and what happened to the constable before Jim.

Author's Response: I did leave a lot of danglers on that chapter didn't I? I'm glad you're looking forward to the answers! 

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2020 02:07 pm Title: Check up on Adam 10

I’m so intrigued by this! I don’t think I’ve ever read a fic where they’re working for emergency services or the police. You have me convinced that you know what you’re talking about in regards to police procedure and lingo! But then of course I am way intrigued by all these cliffhangers! Can’t wait to get some answers to all these questions! But I love how you’ve set it all up without a whole lot of backstory or preamble and look forward to your reveals!

Author's Response:

Well I'm happy to hear I've got you fooled, you can thank warrior and television for that!

I'm glad to hear that the cliffs have piqued your interest, and I look forward to trying to answer those questions! I'm pleased that the little preamble hasn't left you feeling lost, I was a bit worried that might be the case, at the end of the day though we at least know everyone's personality, so thank goodness for fanfic I guess!

Thanks for leaving a review, I live hearing back on this stuff!

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2020 11:28 pm Title: Check up on Adam 10

Ooh, that’s a bit of a cliffhanger! How does Pam know Roy? My bigger question though, is who the constable before Jim was? The fact they don’t speak of him(?) seems ominous, because if there’s one thing I know about police stations is that they can be massive gossips... Plus, if someone has left based on something scandalous, they become warning tales shared the state over... Or that could just be my experience. My husband is a police officer, so I’ve done my fair share of policing social circles. I think that’s why I love this story so much, it kind of feels like him telling me about his day at work.

Stanley may just be the most relatable character of all time - there’s always a Stanley in every station. I can’t wait to see how you answer all the questions you posed in your end note!

Author's Response:

I didn't originally plan that chapter as a cliffy, but I got to that point... and I couldn't not! Sorry-not-sorry. You'll just have to wait and see on the mystery constable, I'll just say that there is a reason they're not gossiped about. This story is canon-adjacent as Comfect put it, so Pam knowing Roy... we'll see the details next chapter hopefully. I'm humbled to hear that you feel like this is similar to your husband telling you about work, that means a lot to me!

Stanley is definitely one of my favourite characters, he just fits this AU so well. Glad you liked him as well.

Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate the feedback! 

Reviewer: GreenyshEyed Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2020 02:45 pm Title: Check up on Adam 10

I love that you've literally dropped us in the middle. Why doesn't anyone talk about the other constable? What's Roy's deal? And then you had the sheer fall to add more questions in the chapter end notes- hahaha!! This is going to be great. Keep going! So many paths this could take. As a former EMT and firewife, I have a special affinity for this fic d84;a039;

Well done!

Author's Response:

Replying with mobile because power is out, forgive any fat fingered words please.

I'm glad you're finding yourself immersed, I wanted to get right into the meat of it instead of the awkward tiptoeing around the cameras etc. Roy's deal should be in the next chapter, the rest are in the outline but not assigned to a chapter yet. I'm happy to hear that the additional questions piqued your interest!

Thank you for taking the time to review, it means a lot to me!

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2020 02:26 pm Title: Check up on Adam 10

Ooooh boy. Assuming anything even vaguely adjacent to canon that's a real moment there. Looking forward to the outcome; but that's not to say I'm only looking ahead. Looking at this chapter, I really enjoyed it. Especially Stanley.

Author's Response:

Really glad that you enjoyed Stanley, he really fits well with the salty old cop stereotype. This story is definitely canon-adjacent, so staticus dramaticus to follow. 

Glad to hear you're enjoying it, thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2020 10:37 am Title: Check up on Adam 10

Very much the feel of a small town Public Safety department. Nice slow not much to do kind of place. Though there is the age old First Responder superstition that if one utters one of the two dreaded words, the First Responder Gods will smite thee with a busy shift. The two dreaded words being "slow" and "quiet." Otherwise known as the "s" word or the "q" word. So that was good.

Yeah, lots of questions about the character drama part of all this. Really looking forward to seeing where you go with that part of everything.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the feel/pace there, that's definitely what I was going for. It feels like the s and q jinx is something that transcends professions, in IT we generally associate that jinx with having a server fail spontaneously, having a client open a malware email and spreading it, or the internet going down at a location.

I'm glad the character drama has some hooks, as much as I dislike it in the television I watch. We should get some answers to the Roy questions next chapter there, so hopefully not a long wait there.

Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate your help and feedback! 

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