1 [Report This]Date: October 06, 2020 11:51 am Title: Murder of a Pig
Ah, poor piggy. We hardly knew him. I think it'll be interesting to see them with an actual mystery to solve. And the choice to bring in Kenny sounds promising, as other than that it feels like the Roy chapter of the story would be pretty much concluded.
Author's Response:
Piggy just got to move onto the bacon afterlife a little early, no worries! It's been a while since I looked at the plot draft for this, I've been on a roll with JAM 6.0 for a bit, but I'll see if I can remember to do a callback to the pig investigation for you. Roy is very much on the path to an early exit, but he won't go quietly... or maybe he will. Admittedly I haven't worked on this for a while, but hopefully I'll get back into it once I finish up with JAM.
Thanks for your kind words and leaving reviews all along the way!
1 [Report This]Date: June 02, 2020 10:05 pm Title: Murder of a Pig
This is fun! Thanks so much for writing and I hope you're well!
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying the story, I love hearing it! I'm doing A-OK over here, I live in the middle of nowhere.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: June 02, 2020 08:09 am Title: Murder of a Pig
I love the procedural! You've balanced it with character plot well.
Author's Response: Thank you! It means a lot to me to hear that. Thanks for the review!
1 [Report This]Date: June 02, 2020 06:40 am Title: Murder of a Pig
Interested in knowing what the pig situation is! Toby on the case! And yep, I can see that Jim arresting Kenny is gonna be a THING. Good chapter!
Author's Response:
Well, let me add 'Pig Watch' to the story outline, just for you. We'll check back in with Toby in a few chapters to see how that turned out.
Thanks for leaving a review, I appreciate it!
1 [Report This]Date: June 02, 2020 03:18 am Title: Murder of a Pig
Oooh, that’s a somewhat dramatic end to the chapter. Why do I feel like Roy is going to react poorly to the news his brother has committed a crime...
I loved Michael calling them “constabros.” That’s just Michael perfectly. I can so see Dwight as the diligent instruction follower, jumping on those school zones. He really would make a great traffic cop - it’s all about the letter of the law. Dwight would be all over that.
I think you’ve got a nice balance of the procedural v. drama so far.
Author's Response:
Well... He's not exactly known for his cool headed decision making skills.
Glad you liked my Michaelism, it was a lot of fun to come up with that. Dwight is indeed the ultimate stickler - except now he has the authority to fine the poor souls that he comes across.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: June 01, 2020 07:39 pm Title: Murder of a Pig
The only thing I'm confused about is the line "RM of Dunder Mifflin." Not quite sure what you're talking about there.
Other than that, nice to see Jim and Pam starting to hit it off. Jim seems like a good cop here. Courteous, professional, knows how to do his job.
Kenny getting arrested by Jim? That could prove interesting to see especially considering how Roy was acting. Nice way to add in a level of drama here. Really looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
Author's Response:
Sorry, the RM stands for Rural Municipality, size depends on the RM but the can be upwards of 10km^2 to 40km^2. I think they're quasi-equivalent to counties in the US but I'm not 100% on that.
Glad to hear you're looking forward to the dramz, hope it doesn't disappoint.
Thanks for dropping by to review!