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Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 18, 2007 09:32 am Title: Chapter 1

What a wonderful story! That text message has been bothering me ever since "Diwali," and I think you handled this beautifully and very realistically. I laughed aloud at Jim's response; very in-character and charming. Nicely done!  --C.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 03, 2006 10:00 am Title: Chapter 1

Her phone still sat, dark and quiet, on the seat beside her.

What a simple, powerful line. *shivers*. You do a wonderful job with descriptive details, here. I love Michael's comments in Pam's car, Karen's note, and especially Pam's agony over what to text. This is really good.

Reviewer: Jonah5 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 03, 2006 07:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Yes, this is how it should happen!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 03, 2006 06:07 am Title: Chapter 1

At least we all know he can wear white to the wedding.’
 K, that made me fall off my chair laughing. Great line.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03, 2006 05:10 am Title: Chapter 1

OMG, I am DYING to know what was in the text message -- thanks for this!  A vision of Steve in his white tux from the 40 Year Old Virgin is dancing in head -- HA!

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03, 2006 12:08 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, that was fast. And cute. Thanks. Love the image of Michael in a white wedding (cue Billy Idol...)

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