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Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2020 09:25 am Title: Error

Lockdown would 💯 make it easier to break up. Definitely. I mean, harder practically but much easier to notice emotionally. Good work! Nice air-five!

Author's Response: Gawd that air-five was difficult! Lol!

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2020 09:22 am Title: F2F

Pam should be grateful: so many Americans don't even wear masks, at least her grocery store people do.

"Or had she just gone completely crazy and was starting to hallucinate colleagues in the fruit aisle?" This is my favorite line, good use of language.

Overall my favorite chapter so far.

Author's Response:

YAY! Thanks!!

About the mask wearing, a friend of mine who lives in New Mexico says things are very strict over there. You just can't get inside the store without a mask. 

Down here, you can't even walk down the street without wearing one. 

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2020 09:17 am Title: Connecting

Well yeah Pam, Roy especially unemployed Roy, isn't a good housemate. You should look into changing that ;). Though that's really hard in lockdown...good luck to her! Good chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks! 

I think this kind of scenario brings up people's qualities, for better or worse.  

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2020 09:05 am Title: Initiating

Oh, yes, I like that. We've had work from home in the US too, and this feels right. Especially Roy being an ass in the background. Good use of the setup to get that into Jim's awareness.

Author's Response:

Zoom meetings are the worst, but going out is even scarier. I'm a professor and we're going to keep stuff online at least until March 2021. Really crazy.

Of course, Roy's just being Roy. Although I've been visiting season 3 and he has his moments.  

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2020 07:07 pm Title: System failure

Ah it hurts that they’re still apart and I feel like they will be for a while! But we know that Jim is very patient, and I can’t wait for more.

Author's Response:

That's more or less the whole idea of the story. To keep them apart for as long as possible. Yeah, I know, I am sadistic that way :)

THANKS for reviewing! 

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2020 03:53 pm Title: System failure

I really am loving this story! I hate that Pam is sick but hope Jim is able to come take care of her. I really have loved all their interactions, though, and the way things has progressed hasn’t felt rushed at all but completely natural! Can’t wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thanks! 

TBH I'm still trying to make up my mind on how involved Jim is going to get. Next chapter is not cooperating :) 

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2020 02:32 pm Title: F2F

Her sending the risotto over gave me such a huge smile. It’s perfect.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Donnamour1969 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2020 01:49 pm Title: System failure

That was an unexpected turn. I actually feel bad for Pam, lol, not a real character. Sorry this will extend their time apart. I hope this has a happy ending. Waiting for more.

Author's Response:

I like the fact of having them apart with no ways to avoid it. I know, I am a bit sadistic that way. 

I do love happy endings though. Thanks very much for reviewing!! 

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2020 01:36 pm Title: Initiating

I laughed out loud at the toilet paper line! This is SUCH a fantastic premise! I can see it all happening in my minds eye so clearly. I kind of hope it goes on for as long as we actually need to be staying inside...but I mean, no pressure! 😉

Author's Response:

Thanks VERY much! I guess spending most of my day on zoom meetings has its perks. 

I don't think it'll be that long (and I'm afraid we'll be inside for some time), but there's still more to come. 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2020 07:27 am Title: System failure

Seems like there's always something with these two. Just when they're getting ready to really be together, this happens. Now I'll admit it's a nice way to add in tension so I'll give that one to you.

The other nice takeaway is they're really starting to open up more about their feelings for each other.

As always really looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Author's Response:

Well, it can't be this easy now, can it?

But you know me, I'm a sucker for happy endings. :)

Thanks so much for your suport! 

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2020 05:21 am Title: System failure

Oh, this is so very real. Pam is having a real rough go of it.
I like that Michael was quick to cry Covid - that seems so very in character to me.
The interactions with Jim were all kinds of sweet. “Feelings” What a coincidence - I have feelings for this story and JAM. I hope Pam is okay...

Author's Response:

Lol, this Michael is the same Michael who declared bankruptcy. In my mind's eye, he REALLY disinfects his phone after talking to Pam.

Pam is going to be ok... eventually. (I'm reading so much about COVID-19's symptoms for this I'm starting to feel queasy) 

Thanks very VERY much for your review! 

 

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2020 11:00 pm Title: System failure

Oh, poor Pam... This whole chapter is amazing and painfully realistic; you could make so many plans, but then something unpredictable happened, and you could do nothing about it. That's so, so real.
And yet, I like the way things go between Pam and Jim. That they are sincerely talking about everything and that they admit feelings to each other, and their mutual care, and Jim's insecurities about being too pushy, all of that are so endearing.
I hope that things will get better! Thank you for this story!

Author's Response:

I love (in a kind of perverse way) the irony of she getting sick right when mandatory lockdown is about to be lifted. 

And, of course, she wouldn't like Jim to be too close because she doesn't want to give it to him.

Thanks very much for your review!! 

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2020 04:57 am Title: Point-to-point

I have less coherent words than usual because work was a lot today, but yes, as usual, this is wonderful.
The it’s a date, and hi/hey, just perfect.
“make bread from scratch” so very Jenna Fischer...
Oh, it’s so very sweet! I feel like Jim is coming on just the right amount of strong.

Author's Response:

Work is terrible, and online work manages to melt one's brain. (Which, BTW, is the reason it took me longer to post the next chapter)

I'm glad you liked it! 

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2020 12:41 am Title: Point-to-point

I read this chapter right after waking up, and it made me much happier than my usual morning cup of coffee.
I don't even know where to start — I LOVE everything about it. Their conversation in the car. The way Pam forgot about social distancing and hugged Jim. Red and black striped pajama pants. The dinner. Oh, the dinner and 'it's a date,' and the fact that he combed his hair made my heart melt. And the sadness of their college and art discussion. And 'I like you.' It was so sweet and adorable, and, perhaps, that's my favorite taste of JAM.
I'm so grateful to you that you're writing this story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapters so much. Thank you!

Author's Response:

Thanks very much for such wonderful review! I'm glad you liked it. I love when they banter/flirt, and doing it over the internet brings back some memories of many years ago. 

I was not sure about who should hug whom, but then I thought Pam is a little vulnerable right now, and feeling both decided about her decision and lonely because of the consequences.  

I hope you like what's coming next. 

Cheers! 

Reviewer: Donnamour1969 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2020 09:07 pm Title: Point-to-point

I'm still really enjoying this.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you are!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2020 05:14 pm Title: Point-to-point

I can very easily see that Roy doesn't think she's serious. You've got his teenager in a man's body kind of attidute down really well here. I wonder if that's going to become more of a factor as we go on or if that's basically the end of seeing Roy in this fic.

Still some trepidation on living on her own on Pam's part. However it seems she's getting over her fears fairly well. Also having Jim there is helpful too. You're doing a great job of them building up a friendship and adding in a lot of fun banter as well.

The video-taco date was fun. Yes maybe a bit quick, but at the same time it's really sweet. Jim's already gone on Pam and its adorable. Pam's warming up to him too and considering she's free of Roy it's lovely to envision.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

I am still considering if Roy should appear back or not. He's somebody I love to write but I don't want to bring him back just because...

Cheers! 

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2020 04:32 pm Title: Point-to-point

Ugh precious. I love zoom Jam so much.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! zoom Jam is the only kind of zoom I care for.

Reviewer: Sam Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2020 09:10 am Title: Leaving

I'm really enjoying this - thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: SprinklesTheCat Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 26, 2020 09:47 am Title: Leaving

I like the thinking about Jim's forwardness!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2020 10:06 pm Title: Leaving

I'm glad to see Pam found the determination she needed to get out of her rut. Roy not caring enough to fight for the relationship hurt, but I'm thinking he'll realise what he's missing once she's gone for sure. Let's just hope that Jim can give her some more reasons no to tread that path again!

I really like the tone you've set with this chapter, it's somber with a hint of hope near the end there, and I really look forward to seeing where things go from here.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! Roy hasn't really understood that Pam means business yet, so he kind of lets her go. But he'll catch up, soon enough.

Reviewer: GreenyshEyed Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2020 05:13 pm Title: Leaving

I really enjoy Jim's willingness to help. Great storyline!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: bottomlesschampagne Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2020 03:18 pm Title: Leaving

Go Pam!!!!

Ugh, you write so well. I love parts where Pam leaves Roy pn her own terms, just brings out so much of the strength and grit her character embodies.

And the second half- JUST ENDEARING!! Loved it to the core.

Author's Response: Thanks so very much!!

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2020 02:44 pm Title: Leaving

“And the cart suddenly was looking like hers and not Roy’s.” There are hints of Fancy New Beesly here - putting herself first for once.

“So it was her fault now. It always was, somehow.” That’s really where this all starts to fall apart - with Roy never owning his actions. I doubt there’s been a genuine “I’m sorry” from him in a very long time, if at all...

“Too bad. I’m not going anywhere. And you can’t either.” This. This is the utterly terrifying part of a locked-down world. Not that it’s ever easy to leave someone you live with - especially when all your finances are intertwined.

“Scared of how trapped she was” I’m just glad she has a bedroom door that locks. This is such a pivotal moment for Pam, and chapter for this story.

“but she felt like taking her mask off after a long shopping trip” A perfect metaphor for the current world, and this story.
Bless Phyllis and her not needing a security deposit. It’s all very sweet.

“She was afraid Roy would follow, but he did not, and that was the thing that made her the saddest.” I totally get this. As much as she wants out, she also wants him to fight for her, at least a little. Otherwise it sort of feels like the past ten years have been for nothing...

Jim is perfectly sweet and supportive here. I love that he sends her simple, practical needed things. He’s just being that good friend that she needs.

Forward, but not pushy, works for me as in character Jim.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much for reviewing. I think that Pam and Roy were simply to different. To Roy, there was nothing wrong because he's actually thinking in completely different terms. 

The whole idea of writing this on a lockdown started with two main situations: Pam meets Jim online and most of their interactions are through a screen, and Pam is physically trapped with Roy. When we were at the hardest of our own lockdown there were many stories bout couples splitting up and literally being unable to leave. Add to that Roy being obnoxious and it's a bit scary.

Roy still doesn't get it. For him, Pam's a little claustrophobic and she'll come around eventually. 

I'm going to try to navigate Jim being forward but also being quarantined so... wish me luck! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2020 11:46 am Title: Leaving

Huge moment for Pam here! And it's probably a lot different than how it's usually portrayed how Pam leaves Roy. She's scared. Scared of letting the life she though she had go by, stepping out on her own with no real direction forward, just grabbing the bare minimums. All during a pandemic lockdown. I get the sense she's barely keeping her head above water, but yet at the same time she's swimming just a bit stronger and making headway to shore as well.

Roy here is unbelivable. I mean I know the guy can get kind of dense, but to just let her walk out like that without a fight? I've got a feeling he's in trouble since he doesn't really know how to take care of himself.

I liked Jim there at the end. His first concern is her. How she's doing, and to send some needed supplies. Great to see him being a stand up guy like that. Also loved him inviting himself along to the shopping trip. Now that Roy's out of the picture, in the important sense, I am 100% behind a more forward Jim. Can't wait to see what comes of this.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much, w4!

Pam is, indeed, very scared. But determined.

And Roy needs to catch up. He lets her go without a fight because he still doesn't think she means business. He thinks she has just a bad case of cabin fever, and that she just needs some fresh air. He'll see how it is soon enough.

Jim of course is jumping up and down with joy, but has the common sense not to let it show right away. And so he becomes the nice guy she needs right now.

:) 

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2020 10:39 am Title: Leaving

This chapter is heavy, but so, so great! It makes me sad to see Pam so broken, but I cross my fingers and hope for the best.
And I found Phyllis' help very endearing.
Thank you!
P.S. I wouldn't mind this forward Jim ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!

It was a heavy chapter to write! I felt like fighting with my husband just because, and I think it was the spirit of the chapter getting into my life.

At first I was going to make Dwight help Pam, but that would've been awkward down the road. 

Forward Jim - Quarantine Jim... it's a fun balance :) 

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