Date: July 15, 2020 10:28 am Title: Jim Makes a Decision
So well written! This was such an important episode for JAM, and Jim. I perosnally adore the scene where Jim tells Dwight that transderring won't be a bad idea; the defeat is written all over his face. You did a really good job bringing out those emotions!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It’s always nice to hear that, and encourages me to write more :)
Date: July 15, 2020 04:23 am Title: Jim Makes a Decision
This breaks my heart a little, but fits into the episode well! It’s nice to get into Jim’s head for these moments. I like what you added into the ending - using it as a catalyst to push Jim into considering Stamford really rounded it all out. Welcome to MTT!
Author's Response: And that was your suggestion! Thank you very much for being my beta reader, this oneshot wouldn’t have been as great as it is without you.
Date: July 15, 2020 01:40 am Title: Jim Makes a Decision
Welcome to MTT. Nice job for your first story. Lots of classic JAM banter. You really did a great job of getting into Jim's lovelorn head. It's painfully clear as to why he put in for the transfer when viewed in this light.
Author's Response: Thank you, I really enjoyed writing that part of this oneshot. I always wanted Jim to actually talk about what was the actual reason he transferred. Not just while comforting Dwight in “Money”, though it was a nice scene.
Date: July 14, 2020 10:05 pm Title: Jim Makes a Decision
It was so lovely, yet so sad... The part I like the most was when Pam asked Jim how it was not to care about other people's opinions. It was so, so in her character!
I hope you'll write more!
Author's Response: And I will! The people of this archive are so kind, thank you.
Date: July 14, 2020 07:00 pm Title: Jim Makes a Decision
Oh poor Jim thinking Pam would never love him back. But suck beautifully written I love this little story.
He was just a kid, how could he have known she actually did love him? 😔💔
But in all seriousness, thank you!