Date: August 18, 2020 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1
This was amazinggggggg. I felt so bad for Jim, I'm positive this is exactly how he felt that night. And then Pam showing up to save him before he moved or anything? Loved it. "I can." My heart soars with the eagle's nest.
Author's Response: Haha I love that last quote. Thank you so much for reading!
Date: August 15, 2020 08:55 am Title: Chapter 1
A lovely spinoff that leaves soany questions! What took Pam from "I can't" to "I can," did she drive home to tie up loose ends with Roy or something? We don't have to know but those are the kinds of things that hooke onto a story, too bad it's a oneshot!
Author's Response: I'm so sorry it's only a one shot, DG. Maybe one day I'll extend it ha.
Date: August 13, 2020 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lovely story! I feel sorry for Jim, his sufferings were too real and the way he dealt with them... yep, that was too.
But I'm happy how things ended up, so thank you for a great fix-it!
I should listen to this song as well, the lyrics are good.
Author's Response: I hope you had the chance to listen to the song! I think it's a permanent favorite of mine now! Thanks for reading!
Date: August 13, 2020 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes I love a CN redo! And yes, SHE CAN! I am blown away by the simplicity and genius of Jim drinking Blue Moons. It’s so good and fits so perfectly. And I really loved this little bit: “or until it felt like the rope that tied them together frayed and released their grips from one another.“ it’s like a little piece of poetry, so pretty! Great job!
Author's Response: BT, you are too kind. Thank you for your sweet words. I was particularly impressed with myself on that line as well!
Date: August 13, 2020 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this, and you nailed everything, from the setting imagery to Jim’s thought and emotions. This feels like it could have been a legitimate alternate ending. I’m sure this is on film somewhere, lol. Very well done.
Author's Response: Oh, I absolutely WISH this was on film somewhere. I would love that! Thanks for reading!
Date: August 13, 2020 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so heartbreakingly sweet. Big impact for such a short story. You can feel Jim starting to slide down a cliff towards pure brokenhearted misery. Even more so when he sees Pam walk towards him. Then out of nowhere she throws him a rope and pulls him back to her. Just gorgeous. Great job with this one.
Author's Response: Thank you, Warrior! I like throwing in a plot twist here and there!